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You are moving in the right direction although improvements are needed. Your main content does demonstrates very good understanding; did not address all details in full. Missing some minor aspects. There is no attention getter. How will you get the attention of the audience to get them to listen? This needs to be the first thing that happens and in the first intro slide it didn’t quite do this. Your conclusion demonstrates very good understanding; did not address all details in full. Missing some minor aspects. 12/15 You demonstrate very good understanding; did not address all details in full. Missing some minor aspects.  You will also need to add images to your presentation so that it’s not just text on every slide. 7/10 You demonstrate a clear understanding of the document organization that included the APA title page, table of contents, and section headings. 5/5 Also I commented previously about the ‘demanding’ tolerance and the negative connotation that it has. It still does and is there a better that would be softer instead of just the forcing of leaders? You may find that leaders don’t need to be forceful or demanding because people just follow them. By changing out that word the tone will change and will have a more positive impact. Just a thought!