this paper needs a lot of work. Read my comments, and you may revise this paper and resubmit it for a better grade.
Question 1: You need to state your point specifically in relation to the question. You go around the bush with information that is not linked to any specific topic sentence. Not easy to read and understand what point you are making.
question 2: good topic but you need to relate media coverage of the war with public perception of the American government’s handling of it.
Question 3 does not address any specific differences between the two parties. You get off track with your quotations in the end.
-In general your quotes need to be specifically relevant to your topic, not off track.
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