Motivation Letter Critical Analysis

Knowing more about how objects around us function has always enthralled me. My childhood dream job was to become a pilot; but as I matured, I realized that my dream is to see an airplane, that I have designed, fly. I have found nothing to be more amazing than to make plans, combine parts and at the end watch, what I have built, work. I am always ready to learn new things, especially those that represent a challenge for me. I graduated with a Bachelor’s Degree in Mechanical Engineering in the branch of industrial engineering from Vel Tech Dr. RR & Dr. SR Technical University.
I did my mini project on engine the theme “To decrease the heat losses in engine using ceramic coating to increase the thermal efficiency and fuel efficiency of the engine”. I am doing my main project in production industry “Shardlow India limited” which is crankshaft manufacturing industry using hot forging. I did my project in increasing the efficiency of furnace. The theme was “To increase the efficiency of oil-fired furnace by recovering the waste heat and preheating the combustion air” to reduce the fuel consumption and inducing a waste heat recovery system.
Meanwhile I have started my internship at Brakes India Limited a leading manufacturing of brakes in world. During my internship, I have learnt about various responsibilities including analyzing customers’ needs, interpreting demands to working systems based on braking, running feasibility studies and providing new solutions for higher efficiency in systems. I have taken part in workshops and training courses in order to extend my knowledge on manufacturing systems. I believe that my experience as an intern at Brakes India Limited is the main reason that drives me to study in Europe.

I have acquired sound knowledge of leading edge engineering principles, tools, practices with emphasis on designing, building and testing systems and now these experiences push me forward to learn more and to take a new horizon to gain more experience. Studying Mechanical Engineering in a country, which is the cradle of this science and origin of technological wonders, is a good opportunity for me to improve my knowledge both practically and theoretically. I expect that this master program provides me chance to get to know with mechanical systems and
affiliates me to the industries, which are living examples of the art of mechanics. I hope that I can gain more experience in dealing with situations, people, systems, demands that will be of a great help to me for my future career. Studying at your multicultural university enables me to improve my interpersonal talents. I would be learning in one of the best universities in Europe. Besides, I will have the opportunity to develop myself in an international environment giving me the privilege to meet new people with different points of view.
That would be very enriching experience for me. I realize the highly competitive demands of the program, but I have the ability, ambition and motivation to exceed the requirements and to excel at the university. I am eager to gain new experiences, and, in my opinion, this program is the best way to achieve that. I am positive that the Aalto University, Finland and especially the mechanical engineering master program would be an excellent start for an ambitious business career. Therefore, I would be very proud and happy if I could be a part of this prestigious university.