Coming of age Critical Analysis

Coming of age On January 1 9th, 2008 1 was the happiest person alive. It was very hot and sunny out. I remember how nice of weather it was. My family and I had taken a vacation to Florida and it was one of the best experiences of my life. 7 years was a long time ago, but still, remember every single detail about that trip. On that day, one of the best things ever in my life happened. Even though most people don’t think this Is a big deal, It was a very big deal to me.
When I was In Elementary school my friends would always ask me if I wanted to go biking around the neighborhood. I would always have to say no because I did not know how to ride a bike. As much as I tried to learn how I would always give up. Nothing would work. I was the last of my friends to learn how to ride a bike. It always made me sad watching people bike down the road. Wishing I knew how to do that. Then one day, my cousin Lexis who Is 2 years younger than me decided she was going to teach me how to ride a bike. E Insisted on It. “Ally! You’re missing out on so much You need to learn” The whole day I thought to myself how many people have tried to teach me how to ride a bike and failed. It was hopeless. I was positive I wasn’t going to learn anytime soon. Maybe even never. Later that day, Lexis came over with her bike, and I had mine. Every minute that went by felt like an hour. Even though I could see the disappointment on her face, she wasn’t going to give up on me. Finally, there was hope.
She had done it! We had done it. I had done it. I was biking down the sidewalk with the biggest smile on my face. I had finally learned how to ride a bike without training wheels. I could finally ride one on my own and be like the rest of the kids. I remember being full of joy that day and riding my bike the whole day long. On that day, I felt different, I felt as if a huge weight had just been lifted off my shoulders. It was an amazing feeling that I’ll definitely never forget.