nutrition

 Your revised topic:my topic is Nutrition
Your revised position:The disparity of eating healthy within low income families.

Introduction

Draft your opening sentence.

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Body

My first supporting point:

Eating healthy can reduce your risk of chronic diseases.

My first evidence:

Poor diet is typically linked with poor income which are also linked with reduced life expectancy and higher rates.

My second evidence:

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My second supporting point:

Physical activity minimizes the risk for chronic disease which are related to nutrition regardless of income status.

My first evidence:

Given that low-income populations suffer disproportionately high rates of chronic disease, efforts to revitalize disadvantaged neighborhood could have a significant health impact on those most in need.

My second evidence:

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My third supporting point:

The effects of not having good nutrition could lead to a high risk of cancer.

My first evidence:

An American Cancer Society research states that poor diet and not being physically active are 2 key factors that can increase a person’s cancer risk.

My second evidence:

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What is one counter perspective to your position?

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How do you plan to address this counter perspective?

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Conclusion

What would be a good concluding statement?

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