In your response, address the following:

• Compare any feedback discussed or the revision strategy you mapped out for future success.
• Point out a connection to your own post by referencing similar experiences or program of study and career choice.

Your response should be about 100 words.  

PEERS RESPONSE:

 I hope all is well the two feedbacks that I receive were editing and revising. They both are good writing essentials they have slight differences. When revising, you want to make sure that your paper is focus and well- structed  an well organized.  The may reason for revising is to make sure you have everything you need in your paper and removed everything you don’t need. For example a writer might read there paper out loud to make sure everything flows. And to make sure they have the right information to support their ideas. Editing consist of reviewing the small elements such has spelling, grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. Also editing begins when your paper is close to finish.

The biggest issue I would like to address regarding my writing is learning how to outline  my ideas together to develop a topic. I would like to address on keeping my audience attention which is important when it comes to writing. The smallest issues that can wait in my opinion is editing that can take place at the final stage of writing. My area of strength when it comes to writing is having the right confidence in myself and also learning to how to outline my ideas. When it comes to my revision strategy would have someone to look over my writing to make sure my grammar, and punctuation, spelling  is correct.