Job well done! Your research background is excellent, I like how you explained the basis of your research, followed by the hypothesis. It’s very important to give the reader some knowledge of what you’re talking about before you start with the hypothesis (followed by the statistical part or the findings).
Thank you for listing your resources. Many students forget to include the resources they used int he paper at the end. Great job!

Your title page is very well formatted! Great job! Remember, as we discussed in the threads, a title page contains the document title, author name, date, Instructur name (if applicable) and a header.

I was not able to locate your hypothesis! It’s very important to phrase your hypothesis in a way that shows the dependent and independent variables if you plan to perform a quantitative analysis, if it’s a qualitative analysis then a general statement as a hypothesis would be enough. For example (-1.5 points):
Do students find online learning easier than onsite learning?

Research Project – Week Two

Before you complete your week two assignment, please read your instructor’s comments about your week one assignment, as well as this week’s lecture. Be sure to include any suggested changes in your project going forward.

In a three- to four- page paper (not including the title and reference pages), include the following:

1. A revised version of your introduction, research question, background research, and hypothesis. These revisions must be based on your instructor’s feedback.
2. An APA-formatted reference list.
3. A discussion of any ethical concerns you might encounter while doing your research.
4. Some preliminary thoughts about your research design.  (This will change over the next few weeks, but it’s useful to think about this early).
5. Ideas about how you might approach sampling data for your research.

Your paper must be formatted according to APA style as outlined in the Ashford Writing Center.